We are the "The Green Room," a constituency of university students who have one single-minded goal: to bring the knowledge of the academy to the public. Though we value what we are able to do ourselves, our real power is in what we are able to help others to accomplish. That is why we are reaching out—we want to help. To this end, the Green Room is committed to diligent scholarship on issues of contemporary relevance, and to sharing what we discover with the world.
First of all the format needs to be changed into MLA for the heading (double spaced) other than that, you have a great start:) Your introduction is strong and with the research to back it up, you can have a really great paper. In your first paragraph your number 13470 needs a comma after the 3. Other than that your beginning research is strong. I can't wait to see where your research takes you! Keep up the good work.
First of all the format needs to be changed into MLA for the heading (double spaced) other than that, you have a great start:) Your introduction is strong and with the research to back it up, you can have a really great paper.
ReplyDeleteIn your first paragraph your number 13470 needs a comma after the 3. Other than that your beginning research is strong.
I can't wait to see where your research takes you! Keep up the good work.
Great start to the essay. This can turn into a very well written essay with the right research and effort added. Good start.
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