Saturday, October 8, 2011

Cayla Lepior Blog #12


  1. you just need a couple more sources, there should be 5!

  2. With your first source i would give you opinion more about the second side of your argument, and at the end of the paragraph give your general understanding of the the source.
    I feel like you explained the second source very well, but also i would add another sentence or two explaining how this source changed your opinion.
    The third source i felt was very helpful and the way you analyzed it helped me to better understand the argument.
    I strongly agree with your next paragraph that the money used for anchor babies should not come out of our taxes. Maybe you could touch on some of the solutions to this other than getting rid of anchor babies citizenship.
    Overal, very strong paper. Way to go!