Friday, October 7, 2011

Maura Weir Exploratory Essay blog #12


  1. I really liked your essay and I learned a lot about a topic I've never heard of. There were a few grammatical errors, but other than that it was a really good essay. You made really good points about privacy and the government and it made your argument valid.

  2. This was a good essay and was fun to read because it's a fun topic to learn about!