Sunday, October 9, 2011

blog #12 michael parente rough draft #2

http://www.scribd.com/doc/68129936/Impact-of-Sports-2nd-RD

3 comments:

  1. Michael, I like the topic. I like how you asked questions and compared different players to eachother while contrasting some as well. A good source of the believing and doubting game. Good sources to make your point across.

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  2. I agree with Adam, you played the believing and doubting game really well in your paper, and for me this makes reading the paper more interesting because you have two viewpoints on the same subject which can cause some conflict in your paper, but it makes it very interesting.

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  3. Really good essay, you addressed all of the aspects and really analyzed the information well. Good job!

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